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First Dates

Contributed by Dirkj on Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 01:29:34 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I fell of my chair
When you gave me a wink
I turned around to see
Who the lucky man is
Then realized the lucky man is me

You walked over to me
And ask me so seriously
Do you wanna go on a date
And I , immediately
Said yes

Later I cursed myself
What have you done
She’s the pretty one
How would I cope
With her touch
I was so affraid

The thought of her
Near me
Drove me wild

Her vibrations took over my soul
It was like I’m in the middle
Of this feel good movie
And she’s my heroine
I just followed every move
Her eyes made
And I knew I would
Be in a safe place

We left the movie
Walking hand in hand
I opened the door for her
As she sensually slide
In the passengers seat
I saw a twinkle in her eye
I gave her a nervous smile

We never made it to my home
Somewhere ,,in a lonely street
We created a magic evening
Full of desire and lust
Driven by our own fears
Of one day being let down
We touched , almost like
Wanted to make sure
We get enough attention
To last a lifetime

But somehow
One amazing night
Wasn’t enough
But memories
Lingers on
instead

Copyright Â© Dirkj ... [ 2011-04-02 01:29:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: First Dates (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 01:28:39 AM AEST
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Very beautiful memory's you have now immortalized.
Good work.
blessings, smiles,
emy

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