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Withdrawal
Contributed by
wizard
on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 07:47:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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While loneliness won’t relent
Her vision in a dream comforts,
Gone for a moment – yet ever present
A kiss relinquished– yet ever sought
As nights become longer
Another day endures,
Her voice unheard – yet ever sweet
Her touch unfelt – yet ever soothing
With this distance steadily farther
A heart intact is squandered,
Waiting to arise – yet ever vacant
Never obtained – yet ever treasured
Copyright ©
wizard
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2011-04-01 19:47:02]
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Re: Withdrawal
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by Shandra on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 07:43:42 AM AEST
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| Wow!!!That is truly the feeling of going through withdrawal.Reminds of my favorite song by Jamie Foxx, Overdose.The last line says it all. I love it! Great write!! |
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Re: Withdrawal
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:04:29 AM AEST
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| Very fine writing, strong and vivid all the way through. Thanks for sharing your inner thoughts like this. |
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Re: Withdrawal
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:29:46 AM AEST
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The heart wants what it wants... When the hearts needs collide with common sense, the mind becomes restless. Love can indeed be like a drug, we become addicted to its intrigue, its beauty, its promise. The withdrawal is among the worst. Beautifully (and painfully) expressed.
~Scorp |
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Re: Withdrawal
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 04:01:47 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Withdrawal
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by allforyou on
Wednesday, 19th September 2018 @ 04:43:30 AM AEST
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I know this is 7 years old but I love this!
-Kara aka allforyou |
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