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Chasing Shadows
Contributed by
northernlights
on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 04:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love’s elusive shadow,
Hands reach out in pain.
Endless voices echo,
Flesh against the rain.
Hidden voices whisper,
The ticking hands of time.
A cup to be held for a moment,
A warm and mellow wine.
A heart so full of longing,
No tender touch to miss.
As slowly flesh awakens,
To greet a lovers kiss.
Shadows pass to darkness,
A mask, revealing lust.
A satiated devil sneers!
As dreams turn to dust.
Sorrow whispers softly, as
yearning fills the heart.
The actress in life’s malady, ,
Declines to take a part.
Copyright ©
northernlights
... [
2011-04-01 16:27:34]
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Re: Chasing Shadows
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by NightOwl61 on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 08:31:01 PM AEST
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| a strong write, very moody, penned with skill. Love the imagery here. tfs |
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Re: Chasing Shadows
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 12:03:32 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
Another fantastic write from you.This left me feeling decidedly melancholic as this is a subject I'm all to familiar with. |
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Re: Chasing Shadows
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 06:40:12 AM AEST
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Yep yep, been there all too often. Good expression and nicely choreographed passages.
kept me interested and created visions in my minds eye. |
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Re: Chasing Shadows
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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There's a classic timelessness to your writting
this passage is flunently effortless
the manner in which this piece unfolds
is quite Shakesperian in that it's graceful yet dramatically so,
a true pleasure to read
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Chasing Shadows
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 02:07:37 AM AEST
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| Wow Anna!! You have really surpassed yourself with this one. From the first word to the last this is real poetry at it's very best. Please post more, look forward to it! |
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