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Autumn Empathy
Contributed by
DIOGENES
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Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 10:09:09 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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In the dusk of life,
I want her to know me when
I don't know myself.
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DIOGENES
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2011-04-01 10:09:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Autumn Empathy
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 01:11:49 PM AEST (User
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Great write.
I know that Alzheimer's isn't fun to any one.
Yet one never knows when it's gonna hit any of us.
Blessings,
emy
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Re: Autumn Empathy
(User Rating: 1 ) by NightOwl61 on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 10:46:51 PM AEST (User
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Sometimes it's not always in the dusk of life when this happens. When my dad started having troubles with his memory, they mentioned alzheimers. They were wrong. It wasn't until later they found it was a cancer. You've certainly captured the uncertainty and frustration in these few lines. Really a fine piece of writing. tfs |
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