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No One's There

Contributed by semperNemo on Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 10:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Alone in the darkness, I stumble and fall
Down the pathway to nowhere, that leads to it all.
There’s no light up ahead, just the light left behind,
Its glow fades with the distance, and soon I’ll be blind.

Alone in the desert; it’s bright and so dry,
Blowing sand stings my skin and the sun hurts my eyes.
As I chase a mirage my feet sink in the sand,
Mirages aren’t real, but I don’t understand.

Alone on a rowboat; I go with the tide,
Let it take me away where there’s no need to hide.
For miles around all I see is the sea,
And for miles around all that’s in it is me.

Alone in a crowd, I feel out of place,
Searching in vain for just one friendly face.
For just one person to hold me, to come be my friend,
But everyone leaves, no one’s there in the end.




Copyright © semperNemo ... [ 2011-03-31 10:55:17]
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Re: No One's There (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 12:07:17 PM AEST
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I must say that although this is sad it is highly readable. I love the rhyme and flow, very talented writing, well done.


Re: No One's There (User Rating: 1 )
by DK-Y2Y on Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 12:37:06 PM AEST
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You are a very talented person.

You maintain a good attachment to metaphorical comparisons and also keep up excellent rhymes.


Re: No One's There (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl61 on Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 04:35:33 PM AEST
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a bit sad. Nice rhythm, wonderful and effective imagery, cleverly penned. Well done. tfs


Re: No One's There (User Rating: 1 )
by Mando on Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 04:46:41 PM AEST
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Very well written it gave the imagination food for thought


Re: No One's There (User Rating: 1 )
by wapalu55 on Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 01:52:42 AM AEST
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The words flow real good you have talent




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