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Thank you
Contributed by
Shandra
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Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 12:21:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Smooth chocolate skin, dimples lightly press his cheek
White Tee, black dickies with a smile so meek
As I watch him put chapstick on his lips
I wonder if he works that good with hips
Dang, he's sexy, and there's no doubt about that
From the way he rocks his shoes to the way he wears his hat
His shoulders are broad, although he's not that big
Like a tall glass of chocolate, can I take a swig
And if that's not enough to make a girl weak
He has beautiful white teeth that sparkle when he speaks
I see him everytime I get on the bus
I'm too old for this, I think I have a crush
When I see his face , I can't help but smile
A young man ain't made me feel this good in awhile
I'm taken, but it sure don't hurt to look
I can't help it this brother is off the hook
Boy, I thank him for being so easy on the eyes
And for feeling I get in between my thighs
Thank You!!!!
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Shandra
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Re: Thank you
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by Tomboy on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 02:42:32 PM AEST
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| You're never really TOO old to have a crush! Nice, fun read!! |
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Re: Thank you
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:33:19 PM AEST
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| Great write enjoyed every warm naughty cheeky detail of it,and detailed enough to bring him to life in our eyes too, I can't help but smile as well! |
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Re: Thank you
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by Zernobyl on
Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 10:18:47 AM AEST
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| Nice. made me smile :) |
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Re: Thank you
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 06:15:15 AM AEST
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| WOW Shandra, this is pretty intense writing, loved it, will def check your work out...hope you have a great weekend |
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Re: Thank you
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 1st April 2011 @ 06:37:53 AM AEST
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| love the chocolate skin line lol |
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