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Stand again
Contributed by
bigj
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Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:27:39 AM in AEST
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when she cries
the heavens pour with rain
for this angel is a gift
yet we take it in vain
not perfect, for no one is
but her smile has power
like the season of spring
when it brings us flowers
but she walks unappreciated
no one speaks love to her heart
when she deserves it the most
when she has loved from the start
she clings on to any hope
because that's all she can grasp
people try to bring her down
ripping apart her past
keep on looking forward
keep that head held high
for one day it will change
and before you will be blue skies
when she rises
this world will know bliss
she will have gained strength
the feeling of an angels kiss.
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Re: Stand again
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by Shandra on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 12:31:22 PM AEST
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| Wow!!! I didn't know you had it in you!!LOL She must be something special. Beautiful, beautiful write!!!! |
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Re: Stand again
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by bigj on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 05:08:58 PM AEST
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| she is actually just a good friend i havent seen in a while.... her damn smile alone was enough to make me write a happy poem..i told her it did and she laughed |
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Re: Stand again
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 05:34:30 PM AEST
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Well sounds likes she is an angel. Friend or what ever.
It's really fresh and a poem that speaks volumes.
a real women can't read this with out cracking a big grins.
Luved it an she's truly lucky to have as a friend.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Stand again
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by Dagman on
Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 11:38:03 AM AEST
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| You got deep emotions and you can show them in your writings, great, lile it... |
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