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fifteen more minutes
Contributed by
RKilgarten
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:16:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Jim, call me Jim
just call me Jack
I am the other woman now
and I can't go back
It was drugs and rock and roll
tension terse and hard
resin smears and credit cards
long time coming, sexual
same old tired repitoire
brush it off
turn away
make up a reason and black the light
now he says he wants me to stay
blanking falling go ahead
lets do the deed
lets run it red
shes waiting for him
scraped and bleeding
and i crawl into his bed
all the sources say: men run different
especial when cut to be less resistant
test the theory
its so easy
can it really be so easy
can it really be this easy
this time he is blacked out, standing
a good nights sleep five days away
my ears rush with bloody noise
filling sound of airplanes landing
I'm a giver, but
he wants fifteen more minutes
It was sex and drugs and rock and roll
but I made him leave
faith in men wrecked and dangerous
in the silence he asks reprieve
Copyright ©
RKilgarten
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2011-03-30 11:16:45]
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Re: fifteen more minutes
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by UNORTHODOX on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:59:53 AM AEST
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A raw powerful write
I admire the realness of this passage
temptation is a beast nearly impossible to slay
poetically stirring certainly original
well written
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Re: fifteen more minutes
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by NightOwl61 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:40:28 PM AEST
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| Really an original, gritty piece. Very well penned. |
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Re: fifteen more minutes
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by CherryReadPoet on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:44:53 PM AEST
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| I love it, I feel like you're trying to tell a story and you definately sold it well :) |
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Re: fifteen more minutes
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:55:17 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
So sad but well done.
Good work.
big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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