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Deception
Contributed by
shyness
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Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 08:12:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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A hole is forming deep inside,
I can't run from and I can't hide,
my whole world is falling apart,
And i doubt i will excape with my heart,
I trusted him and now i see,
there are better things out there then me,
he had me fooled so i truly believed,
he was so different but i was decived,
there will never be a happy time,
for me to smile and stop the sad rhyme,
there is only sadness deception and despare,
and its getting to the point i know longer care,
what will be left of me when all is through,
i thought i had found a kind of peace i never knew,
but really i was lost in a world of decept,
maybe its time to cut my losses and admit defeat.
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shyness
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2011-03-30 08:12:27]
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Re: Deception
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by bigj on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 10:11:12 AM AEST
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| oh how much i love this poem. at times every broken heart feels this way. i loved this write. |
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Re: Deception
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by semperNemo on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 05:25:32 PM AEST
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| this is exactly how i feel right now...well done and thanks for sharing, it makes me feel less alone. |
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Re: Deception
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by PoetMasterDani on
Wednesday, 20th April 2011 @ 10:46:25 PM AEST
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| I am feeling the same way as you. I can completely relate to your poem. I hope all works out. |
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