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Anal-izing, Ah ha!
Contributed by
StacyLynnG
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Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 09:27:58 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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A soul crushing sinking feeling
Worry tremors through the deepest tendons
My wheeling
and ever tender sanity is threatened
Emotion is hazing logic
The endless pit of wrenching guilt sits heavy
I scold myself in a tone, caustic
The walls are crubling in my levee
Stop it when it starts
Control is barely feasable
So I seek help from my heart
I hope I can be teachable
Analizing, re-analizing and over-analizing some more
Anal-izing, Ah ha!
I swallow the therapy and ingest the pill
Then try to focus attention
Rid me of my ill
Loose the dam of emotional repression
Listen to my logic
A turn of determination sits heavy
I talk to myself in a tone, not caustic
Building brigdes in my levee
Anxiety, Ah ha!
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Re: Anal-izing, Ah ha!
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by NightOwl61 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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That's some write. Analyzing and re-analyzing one's self can be a neverending adventure. Seems after all the therapy and meds and post it notes all we're left with is a bill. Really quite a potent piece. The second to final line, "Building brigdes in my levee" could probably use a real quick spellcheck to fix bridges. Great write.
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Re: Anal-izing, Ah ha!
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by alicewhite on
Saturday, 15th October 2011 @ 02:31:53 PM AEST
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| Very well written,i i remember that feeling well,but we can all self heal , your body eventually counteracts the damaging effects of adrenaline and cortisol by producing oxytocin, which is known as the love hormone which is produced when you have a baby to aid the bonding process, and the body and mind respond to it by making even more receptors which then increases our ability to love and feel at ease. |
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