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The In-Between Time
Contributed by
NightOwl61
on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 10:36:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Today is almost over,
And tomorrow isn't here.
There is a softly silver, biding
Glow of twilight drifting near.
And a tender, sublime coolness
To the August breeze
That dances so forlornly
Through these ancient willow trees.
It is a time in-between
The there along the now,
A fraction of a moment
In-between the here and how.
A softly whispered wonder
Of what may come to be,
If she awakens to a sunrise
And sets the morning free.
Tomorrow is vague and voiceless.
And today is but a dream
That haunts every waking moment
Of the moments in-between.
Surreal with shades of wonder
Which beckon the shaded breeze
And the whisper of a whatsis
That haunt such simple mysteries.
Today is nearly over,
And when tomorrow is today
We'll see the softly moving
Silver glow Of twilight fade away.
With a tender wisp of morning dew
To greet the August air.
When today is finally over
And tomorrow's everywhere.
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Copyright © 2011 R. D. Remler
All Rights Reserved
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Copyright ©
NightOwl61
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2011-03-28 22:36:33]
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Re: The In-Between Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 11:12:09 PM AEST
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Perfect and inspiring. This is some damn fine writing.
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Tim
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Re: The In-Between Time
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by Harsh on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 11:29:29 PM AEST
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pretty imaginative!!!
great write.
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Re: The In-Between Time
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:34:17 AM AEST
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| Wonderful imagery creating a truly beautiful and atmospheric write. |
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Re: The In-Between Time
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by Shandra on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 07:04:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful!!! Great write |
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 08:43:10 AM AEST
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| wow great write |
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Re: The In-Between Time
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:42:04 PM AEST
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This is a flowing and beautiful write. I was swept away in the beauty of it all.
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