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Lost at sea
Contributed by
Bigj
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Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 01:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In this massive ocean
I am just a little boat
Struggling from the waves
Grasping to any hope
Every wave that pounds
A little of me breaks
Leaving pieces of me
In this salty lake
Floating in my tears
Created from sweat and blood
Losing passion, becoming hard
Feel my heart, hard as wood
This place has become home
Too long out on this sea
Searching for solid ground
Fighting for sanity
Copyright ©
Bigj
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2011-03-28 13:21:00]
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Re: Lost at sea
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 03:44:46 PM AEST
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apologies.
call it plagiarism but you inspired me!
ta
Allan |
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Re: Lost at sea
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by Zernobyl on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 09:18:34 PM AEST
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| You can create a nice image in my head with your words. Good job. |
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Re: Lost at sea
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 02:05:48 PM AEST
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i like this poem and the rythm in your poetry,
it reminds me a bit of one of my poems called darkest hour, i shall read more of yours, they are very good |
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