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The Martyr (Without A Cause)
Contributed by
daryllew151
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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As He Stand Before You Ready To Die
He Reconsiders and Begins To Cry
Now Not Sure If He is Ready To Go
So Much In Life he Wanted To Know
Tears of blood, Silent Screems
lived a of life of ruined dreams
The Mirthful Child will Smile No More
He Doesn't Know What He Died For
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2003-04-26 14:05:00]
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause)
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 02:36:34 PM AEST
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good write, thank you for sharing
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause)
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:06:03 PM AEST
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well done!!
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause)
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:16:32 AM AEST
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Mmmmmmm......urm, well, ah...
Did you write this from personal experience? |
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause)
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by DarylLew151 on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 06:39:28 PM AEST
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Re: The Martyr (Without A Cause)
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by alasdaircairns on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:14:14 PM AEST
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| This is a fantastic poem. I can't believe people don't get it!!! A brilliant choice of words that tells a big story in a short space of time. Keep it up :-) |
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