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Pain Pain go away
Contributed by
Dirtysouth9457
on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 09:40:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In losing you I lose my life,
The woman that could one day be my wife.
Getting you back is my main goal,
For i love you with my whole heart and soul.
I wish I knew what more to say,
Because for my cluelessness, I fear, I’ll pay.
pain pain go away dont come again another day
I need you now to piece the parts,
And heal my shattered, broken heart.
Without you everything is grey,
You are the bright in all my days.
Yes i may have been no fun,
But given the chance I would change what I’ve done.
pain pain go away dont come again another day
Our relationship will be anything but plain, I will do my best to entertain.
I cannot offer you glitter and gold,
But i offer my love and trust, till the days we’re old.
So give me another chance and u will find it true,
That you feel the same as I feel towards you.
pain pain go away dont come again another day
So come back to love me forevermore,
And ill do everything to make you soar.
We will wine and dine, drink and joke,
And yes together we will smoke.
With you my life will be complete,
And together we will know no defeat.
pain pain go away never return another day
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Dirtysouth9457
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2011-03-27 09:40:40]
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Re: Pain Pain go away
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by Shalu on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 09:48:33 AM AEST
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| Hello dear!i really like your poem.u have expressed your thoughts so well.Well done and have a good lyf! |
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Re: Pain Pain go away
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 11:35:46 AM AEST
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| Nicely expressed, very moving. |
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Re: Pain Pain go away
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by Shandra on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 03:27:39 PM AEST
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| What a way with words, I enjoyed this write. |
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Re: Pain Pain go away
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 05:51:05 PM AEST
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Despite the agony you've detailed here, you wrote this in such a calm manner, but thats what miraculously happens when you're thinking of that special someone, no? :)
I hope all goes well for you and that person. Great write...
take care
-K.Z. |
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