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Dreamshell (Ver.2)
Contributed by
Aspirant
on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 04:43:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Hard, unbroken, soaking in a
-- Why don't I just turn away
And never hurt another day?
So helpless here before my hand
To wake, to thirst, and long expand
Upon the virtues 'neath the sand
Where ere I built a castle grand--
The pearl of the golden strand.
My beach cut;
Ravaged, faded,
Shining melancholy grey,
Like a circle on my mind
(1-dimensional rewind)
Find the path to make the find.
Regressing lines reveal the bind
That silver flowing streaks consigned
From Sun to Moon to silt, aligned.
Till past from present, disenshrined
Till light from darkness comes, refined
I will not turn, though I go blind.
Copyright ©
Aspirant
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2011-03-26 16:43:16]
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Re: Dreamshell (Ver.2)
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by NightOwl61 on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 10:27:41 PM AEST
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| a strong write, well crafted and quite vivid. Really rather good. I wouldn't change a thing. |
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Re: Dreamshell (Ver.2)
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 12:59:27 PM AEST
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This is a well written and powerful verse.
Michelle |
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