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The Liar
Contributed by
JimClarence
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Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 04:30:11 PM in AEST
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The Liar: make an interesting life out of words, zany and crazy and quite absurd
I've done all that or hadn't you heard, my interesting life put in words
My interesting life is now taking it's toll, open my mouth and the lies quickly roll
Deeper and deeper keep digging that hole, my lying is taking it's toll
Lie to my friends and my father and mother, lies to cover, another, another
To my imagination I wander and open and delve, lying so much I'm believing myself
I crumble and stumble and trip up and fall on the bull***** that I have been telling you all
On my inventions and fantasies and stories so tall, I crumble and stumble and trip up and fall
Copyright ©
JimClarence
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2011-03-26 16:30:11]
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Re: The Liar
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 11:41:19 AM AEST
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very well written,
Good descrption of lier |
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Re: The Liar
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by NightOwl61 on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 11:02:29 PM AEST
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| An interesting read. Writer's of fiction do tend to tell those tall tales that can go on and on. Enjoyed the rhyme on rhyme rhythm you've used here. A rather enjoyable, thoughtful piece.3 |
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Re: The Liar
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by DIOGENES on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 11:18:39 PM AEST
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| Very good meter, phrasing & verbage that lead to a very smooth read. Well done. Thank you. |
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