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Days
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 12:51:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Those were such warm fuzzy days
Filled with love and understanding
Even in winter - We had a glow
That would never change
Now all gone ,,,up in a haze
Missing my childhood days
Missing your face
Don't even have pictures
To remind me how
We laughed at silly things
The only thing left
Vague memories
Scripted in my mind
Of me, of you
Rolling in the sand
Holding hands
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-03-26 00:51:22]
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Re: Days
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 01:03:37 AM AEST
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Nice write, set me to reminiscing of days gone by,
Last verse is really good,simple yet effective.
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Re: Days
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by duff on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 05:55:31 AM AEST
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| A sincere and heartfelt write that oozes emotion and a delicate touch. It reads like a time capsule and it put a smile on my face. Great job |
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Re: Days
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 12:47:28 AM AEST
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I absolutely love the reminiscing feel of this. Thank you. I enjoyed reading it.
Tim
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