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Vitamins
Contributed by
duff
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Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 08:40:48 PM in AEST
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Like able sugar needing cane
Fables sweeten foolish tongues
To the spies born without spines
Opinions taste like snowflakes
Paranoia crawling up the hare
Trees wave with charred fingers
Battered by those candied smiles
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Re: Vitamins
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by poeticjestix on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 11:11:48 AM AEST
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you want to swap the vitamins for anti-depressants.
Only joking! Scary though and I'm struggling to get it
(Says more about me than you). |
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Re: Vitamins
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 03:12:03 AM AEST
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| Deep indeed! And as dark as a lonely Welsh mountain night. Writing like this is truly the work of a dark, imaginative mind. Well done. |
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Re: Vitamins
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by UNORTHODOX on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 11:24:03 PM AEST
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The name of this passage along with it's content
is overwhelmingly intricate
each line tells a story of it's own in great depth
Your signature is so distinctive ,seeing the way you
string words together in it self is a delight
-Fables sweeten foolish tongues-
an instant classic line, just brillant
Truly enlightening write
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Vitamins
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by ming on
Tuesday, 12th April 2011 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST
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This whole poem ROCKS! I wish it was mine. :P
sugar needing cane, opinions taste like snowflakes, battered by those candied smiles! Love it all. Great write. Can't wait for more.
ming |
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Re: Vitamins
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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like a dark nature write, i love every line,
hugs n' love nessa |
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