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Dear friend.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 03:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Dear friend,
There are no words I can offer,
No knowledge, no wisdom to proffer,
Can't ease what you suffer,
I'm left dumbfounded,
Astounded,
Impotent.
So all I can do,
Is hope for you,
Clarity and solace,
Amongst the forests,
Valleys,hills,
Still lake waters,
Calming quarters,
Of where you reside.
Mat.
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huwbeauty
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2011-03-25 03:09:57]
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Re: Dear friend.
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 05:55:59 PM AEST
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| Nice writing, I like the tone and sincerity of the words and how they combine to create a loving picture. |
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Re: Dear friend.
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by duff on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 06:11:26 AM AEST
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A very intricate and intelligent piece of writing that has a mysterious feel to it. I especially like the second verse. There is a tranquility about it that reads very well. Another fine write Mat. Very well done
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Re: Dear friend.
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by cashfan1 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 12:29:34 AM AEST
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Mat
I've only just come across this fine piece. Thank you very much for thinking of me. I am indeed finding the solace in my landscape. |
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