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Lonely Path.
Contributed by
marlenarawrxd
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Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 08:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I walk this path and I look at the ground,
No one is trustworthy, at least no one I've found.
I'm begging for someone to prove me wrong,
Some people do, just not for long.
Please do something to stop the hate,
I'm filling with doubt and I always debate,
If this is all worth it, worth the pain,
The sorrow, the pity, there's nothing to gain.
I've lost all hope, it won't come back.
Life is worthless, and that's a fact.
Now I'm done, and I won't come home,
I'll finish this life, walking sad and alone.
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Re: Lonely Path.
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by Zernobyl on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 11:47:59 PM AEST
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| I can totally relate to this at the moment. |
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Re: Lonely Path.
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by Dirkj on
Thursday, 24th March 2011 @ 01:00:04 AM AEST
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| you can always find a diamond somewhere, just keep looking, could be round the corner |
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Re: Lonely Path.
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 25th March 2011 @ 03:58:45 AM AEST
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I completely understand your sentiments here and they are put across very well indeed.
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