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MAKER OF MEN…OR MONSTERS?
Contributed by
Tomboy
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Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 10:50:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Oh poor Victor Frankenstein
How the mighty have fallen!
What devil, demon bewitched you?
Obsession, ego, clouded moral judgment
Tread where no man dared to go
Profaned sacredness of life
Twisted, demented mind.
Your hands crafted, manipulated, conjured
Meticulously interwove body parts of the dead
Labored in a dark, forbidden laboratory.
Results: a detestable, horrific creature,
A loathsome thing.
The serpent has beguiled you.
Death, not life, is the outcome of it all.
Who are you, mortal man, dare to emulate God?
Your monster lacks the special ingredient: a soul.
Lesson learned: man creates man,
Creation brings death to man.
There you lie in state
In your earthly house of cement and graveyard.
Nothing man creates is truly lasting.
He cannot breathe life into the dead.
Only the Almighty Spirit,
Creator of All Things can do this.
Copyright ©
Tomboy
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Re: MAKER OF MEN…OR MONSTERS?
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 11:23:45 AM AEST
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Re: MAKER OF MEN…OR MONSTERS?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2011 @ 09:10:42 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Also creative.
Blessings,
emy |
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