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The Darker Face
Contributed by
kels497
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A sharp breeze slashes
through the blades of grass
Plays with the outstretched fingers of trees
that are so starkly sketched
against the smothered stars
As I walk the blackened street
Shadows slip into reality
and reality slips into a dream
Freed by the darkness
I let loose my demon
out to stalk beneath the acid moon
For yet another night
And the Normal Life
Only returning with the sun
Copyright ©
kels497
... [
2003-04-26 09:35:00]
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Re: The Darker Face
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 01:53:36 PM AEST
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This is wonderfu!! Nicely written, well done!!
Michelle |
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Re: The Darker Face
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 11:39:32 PM AEST
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| Pretty good write. |
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Re: The Darker Face
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:36:43 AM AEST
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It's very stark and grim. An accomplished write. There ought to be a "health warning"
on poems like this that make you shudder. |
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Re: The Darker Face
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:30:51 AM AEST
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| deep, dark and damn great:) hugs nessa |
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Re: The Darker Face
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:25:25 PM AEST
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amazingly good poem. i fell in love with it right away. just..wow..thats all there is to say...just wow.
-Christian |
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