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Burning
Contributed by
marlenarawrxd
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Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 07:18:42 PM in AEST
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There's an awful feeling you've given me,
One I can't escape.
I've waited and I've wept alone,
I've built up so much hate.
There's a wall in the way of happiness,
And though I try to burn it down,
The flames engulf me,
And with the smoke I slowly drown.
And as my skin fries against my bones,
I'll call out for help,
But does anyone hear?
No. No one ever does.
My life has really become
A living hell.
Copyright ©
marlenarawrxd
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2011-03-21 19:18:42]
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Re: Burning
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 09:09:46 AM AEST
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| I like it. It explains your feeling very well. |
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Re: Burning
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by bigj on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 12:55:34 PM AEST
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| Loved this write. Currenltly feeling this and trying to fight my way out of it. |
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Re: Burning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 07:16:50 AM AEST
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| interesting... |
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