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Dead
Contributed by
marlenarawrxd
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Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 06:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am a zombie.
I watch people flee.
I feel nothing.
There is no saving me.
Help never comes.
I walk alone.
I am among the living dead.
Nothing feels like home.
I stagger to my feet.
My strength slowly fades.
I am a zombie.
Blow me up with grenades.
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marlenarawrxd
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2011-03-21 18:56:19]
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Re: Dead
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by whitt on
Monday, 21st March 2011 @ 06:58:29 PM AEST
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| its really good to be your first...my first was so bad after i read it again a few weeks later but i never did put it on here :P |
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Re: Dead
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 08:28:25 PM AEST
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Short and very Powerful,plus I can really relate to the feelings you've described here!! I hope your doing okay!! Keep writing and sharing it will lift you out of where you are now with time!!!
respectfully,
Dana |
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Re: Dead
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by bigj on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 01:12:01 PM AEST
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| Lol, I love this one...great for the first |
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Re: Dead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 07:30:36 AM AEST
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| not bad, it's a cool poem. keep it up |
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