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Forget my soul
Contributed by
full_blur
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Accept my silence; A courtship in splendor
Forgive my absence; Kiss lips that are not there
Call my name; You cannot remember
Hear my footsteps; Cricket violins a'tremor
Picture my dwelling; A house with no windows
Envision my face; Clouds mockery for wind blows
Forget my soul; The shifting of sand
Erase my being; And take his hand
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Re: Forget my soul
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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well written I love this poem
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Re: Forget my soul
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 11:48:31 AM AEST
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this is a very clever style, i like it, particularly the second to last stanza.
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