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Graveyard shift
Contributed by
kels497
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Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Clouds drifting in the sky
drowning in the unearthly light
of the stark-white moon
Casting sketched shadows
on bitter ground
The icy wind
That stirs the trees to life
Whispers inaudible warnings
feeds the fires of my core
brings the Hunger to the surface
I listen to the clamour of the night
It brings me stories
Of long ago battles
And present day struggles
Around me
a world so troubled with anger
so lost in its sorrows
That all else is forgotten
except by the night
Copyright ©
kels497
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2003-04-26 08:35:00]
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Re: Graveyard shift
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 10:22:34 PM AEST
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Oh wow!! This is great!!
Michelle |
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Re: Graveyard shift
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th May 2003 @ 05:02:40 PM AEST
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| this is great!! i love how you give such vivid images in your poem, and also the reference to times long ago; that happens to me when i am outside at night:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Graveyard shift
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by scott_milton on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 07:31:32 AM AEST
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| excellent poem. im surprised its the least read- its very powerful and the free verse approach is done well |
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