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A Sick Bird
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 11:45:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Crumbled paper
Dream
Remember me
In love
The world is
A sick bird
Lifted up
In human hands
Left alone
I see the palliation
Of love
In lips I cannot touch
In hands I cannot hold
Fear surrounds me
A dark coagulate
Shadows find me
Weak, uninspired
The world is a sick bird
I am the sky held from it
By hands too heavy to fly
Too strong to understand
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2011-03-19 23:45:59]
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Re: A Sick Bird
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 01:42:20 AM AEST
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| Very well written. This is so readable, a free flowing piece that leaves the reader wanting more. |
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Re: A Sick Bird
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 12:37:54 PM AEST
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Good morning Abe,
It's morning for me today, (2:30 P.M.)
Great writing as always.
I've been missing you.
Big huggs, smiles, emy
You are certainly right, this Planet is a sick bird. |
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Re: A Sick Bird
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by Tomboy on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 03:25:34 PM AEST
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| intresting veiw of the world |
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Re: A Sick Bird
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 11:35:42 PM AEST
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I have to admit that I am not exactly sure what this is about but I know that I like it. I don't always concern myself with fully understanding poetry. Sometimes I just go with the flow of it and enjoy. I enjoyed this. Seemed dark, sad, and wanting. Conjured a lot of cool images.
Thanks,
Tim |
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Re: A Sick Bird
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by Brianimal on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2011 @ 01:05:35 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. I love poems that spare useless words and allow me to paint the picture. True, it flows well...a slideshow in my mind hat I can feel. I like it alot. Thanks for sharing |
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