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Set Sail for Dublin
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 01:28:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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sitting at a bar
on the north side of the east coast
i looked out the window across the ocean far
with one thought of what i desire most
to myself i say
its not really as far as it seems
i say it again and on this day
i realize what my desire means
going in alone
my friends to stay behind
my family left at home
their prayers in my mind
i dont know what i would tell them
but i could think of something
but if i get my wish in the end
i will set sail for dublin
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Re: Set Sail for Dublin
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by nerimonster24 on
Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 08:54:08 AM AEST
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| I really like the simplicity of this one. Lovely:) |
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Re: Set Sail for Dublin
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 02:53:50 AM AEST
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| Well thought out, very well executed. Simple and very readable, and by the way, Dublin is a great place, hope you get to see it soon. |
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Re: Set Sail for Dublin
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by DIOGENES on
Monday, 4th April 2011 @ 03:53:50 AM AEST
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| Great flow & symbolism that makes for a smooth read. I'm with you. Let's go! Thank you. |
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