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white elephant
Contributed by
ming
on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 09:45:36 AM in AEST
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abstract
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full heart
broken
and
crone-wise
edited
too many
Peter Pan's
forgotten
the cost
of a
hidden kiss
come back
all grown
up
and
unseen.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-03-17 09:45:36]
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Re: white elephant
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 12:39:13 PM AEST
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The depth between the lines is astounding
in these several lines are revealed
a lifetime's wisdom
the last verse collapsed my lungs
a brilliant beyond words passage
- True genius
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Re: white elephant
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 20th March 2011 @ 01:13:15 AM AEST
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I think it might be that we only forget that we are seen...but it would be absolutely comfortable to be unseen
keep writing, I'll keep reading
always, abraham |
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