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IF
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 01:11:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If i can laugh
With only me around
If i can sail on the moon
Not two
But one
If i can say I'm
Happy
Not with you around
If i can tell a joke
To myself
And smile
Have a nice dinner
With a one glass of wine
What a sad life it would be
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Dirkj
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2011-03-17 01:11:52]
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Re: IF
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by wapalu55 on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 03:11:26 AM AEST
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| I don't really get the drift of it I do understand being alone if thats what this means |
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Re: IF
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by neonfrost on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 07:18:38 AM AEST
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| What a strange perception on loneliness, I thought the poem was happy until the last line :) good work |
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Re: IF
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by kleetas on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 07:33:20 AM AEST
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What a sad life it would be
to end your thoughts so shortedly
we know theres more..stacks out the door
FILL UP THE PAGE AND RAMP UP THE RAGE
see what i mean? dig it? get it! got it! goooood!..its so easy when someone else does all the work for you? eh? goood write! |
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Re: IF
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by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 08:23:21 AM AEST
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| i get it i live it i like it |
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