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i see. i hear.
Contributed by
Deadlyrose
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Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 11:35:01 PM in AEST
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i see her,
her once-perfect look ruined by tears and sorrow.
i hear her,
her soft sobs of misery.
i see him,
his smile cruel and wicked.
i hear him,
his horrifying laugh.
i see me,
my never-perfect look grinning.
i hear me,
my voice say the words i love you.
i see you,
your expression of love.
i hear you,
asking to hold my hand.
what I see and hear with two people is different.
they never worked.
but we have a connection..
that will never die.
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Deadlyrose
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2011-03-16 23:35:01]
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Re: i see. i hear.
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 11:41:10 PM AEST
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| most things are not forever :) enjoy the moment and try to have a lot of fun! |
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Re: i see. i hear.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 05:18:02 PM AEST
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Who says it's not very good ?.
It is written from the heart for one thing, which is always good.
Well done
Steve |
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