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Birds and the bees of law
Contributed by
validus
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Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 09:46:06 PM in AEST
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The birds at the window,
the bees in hive.
The police are fighting,
while theives connive.
The birds fly high,
and watch the sky.
The bees stay low,
where people go.
While those of evil,
hide in disgrace.
We abide by the law,
and show our face.
Copyright ©
validus
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2011-03-15 21:46:06]
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Re: Birds and the bees of law
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by Aspirant on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 12:39:50 AM AEST
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| Obtuse perhaps, but I like that. Enjoyed this... just the second last line was slightly cliche. |
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Re: Birds and the bees of law
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by Anoo on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 03:38:12 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the poem. The message of being connected is there in very simple terms which I think is great.
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Re: Birds and the bees of law
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by Anoo on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 03:38:13 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the poem. The message of being connected is there in very simple terms which I think is great.
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