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Alone
Contributed by
CherryReadPoet
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Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 05:03:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Are you alone,
In this crazy, mixed up world?
Do you fee like
Nobody ever cares?
Do you hate your life,
Do you know why?
Would it hurt to just break down and cry?
In silence, you can't hear yourself pleading,
Because no one else can hear you,
So why hear yourself?
Like an SOS is planted on your face,
But no one can see it and no one,
Can hear it?
Like you're lost at sea with no one to call.
It feels so pointless to start the day,
When all it is, is an act.
Trying to be happy, to please people,
Fake smiles, laughs and moments as these,
Are all masking the pain,
And you can't stop it,
No matter how hard you try.
And you're feeling so fake,
It hurts inside.
But sometimes to let go, you must break down,
And just cry.
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CherryReadPoet
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2011-03-15 17:03:53]
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Re: Alone
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by RachelSixx on
Wednesday, 16th March 2011 @ 03:28:10 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, i know this feeling all too well. great job. |
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Re: Alone
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 04:00:15 PM AEST
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We often keep things to ourselves because we assume nobody cares or that they will find our trouble trivial.
There are people out there who do care, finding them is the art
Nice work.
Steve |
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Re: Alone
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by nerimonster24 on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 09:55:23 PM AEST
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| I love this. BEAUTIFUL, but sad. |
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