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Do I Ever
Contributed by
mando
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:03:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Do I ever cross your mind
If I do why don't you pick up the phone
when I call
I charish the moments of laughter
we shared
Now I antisiapate each tear before they fall
Do I ever cross your mind
Each day feels like an eternity
some what similar to the sands of an hour glass
but Time still continues to pass
My world has turned Misty Blue
lately my nights has turned to daydreams of you
I've given all I have to give
These memories I hold makes it
easier for me to live
After all the rainy days disappears
stiil I wonder do you still care
I continue to ask
Do I ever cross your mind
Copyright ©
mando
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2011-03-15 11:03:12]
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Re: Do I Ever
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
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I think that's a question we all wonder when it comes to someone you like or even love. My favorite part of this was:
"Each day feels like an eternity
some what similar to the sands of an hour glass
but Time still continues to pass"
Reminds me of something I've written in the past:
Here I am falling,
in the hourglass; your heart.
Let me slow things down a bit,
the gears get clogged with sand.
And I am the sand.
-Kara |
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Re: Do I Ever
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 03:55:37 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful write,heart felt and fill of emotion.you can almost feel the pain of not hearing from one love.i like this vry much. |
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Re: Do I Ever
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 06:14:42 PM AEST
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I can totally relate to this write and I'm sure we all have these thoughts and feelings.
Great write again, friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Do I Ever
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by Shandra on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 02:42:50 PM AEST
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| Yes!! LOL This is amazing. |
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