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A WORN OUT HEART...
Contributed by
pooja
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Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 04:31:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Sinking in a hell hole, I still wanna damn it all
Looking out a broken window at fences that never fall
My hands bleed as I try to break and run
I am pushed back to the nowhere I had begun
Time ceases to move as I bend under my load
Like driving for hours together on an empty road
The pain is numbing every ache I had
As I watched my every cherished dream go bad
A worn out heart that has bled too much
It shrinks and shrivels at every gentle touch...
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2011-03-13 04:31:07]
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by mehuel on
Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 05:08:16 AM AEST
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| very touching, especially the ending.. |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2011 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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I can relate.great job here.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by texasw97 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 02:35:08 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem. I feel you in every way. I once had a heart like this. It took mine six years to heal. Now I'm about to be married for the second time after a nine year absence without love |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:13:42 AM AEST
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| Beautiful baring of the soul, empathic words that resound in depth and sensitivity. |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 8th June 2011 @ 02:32:47 PM AEST
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| The poem really tells me you're hurting and hope it will all end. |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 02:37:15 PM AEST
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so sad... so beautifully penned,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A WORN OUT HEART...
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 17th June 2018 @ 05:06:26 AM AEST
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I can feel the anguish in this flow
well done.... |
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