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Help me?
Contributed by
Mrbrownstone7285
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Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 07:37:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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These are silent screams for help.
But there's nobody there to hear.
I broke down,
Until all i could draw was blood and tears.
All i really want is death,
Just to draw my final breath.
Then at my life's end,
You will all pretend.
To mourn the death of a life,
That was never truly there.
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Mrbrownstone7285
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2011-03-12 07:37:31]
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Re: Help me?
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 07:56:43 AM AEST
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Such words can only be found in chasm of despair and depression.
Take that deep breath you long for, then the next one will be easier.
Soon to find there are those who care and love you, they may be the ones who don't understand you and yet they will love you. |
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Re: Help me?
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by xnickix7 on
Monday, 14th March 2011 @ 09:00:23 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very beautifully written. I feel a lot of sorrow from this poem. Writing really helps in releasing these emotions. It will get better, keep your head up. |
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Re: Help me?
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by whisper-on-the-wind on
Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 02:38:15 PM AEST
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| Sounds from the heart, if so, there are those who still lisen. good work. |
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