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Beloved
Contributed by
Strebor
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Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 01:17:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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What is now has already shone,
The touch of love faded as the sun degraded,
The future is a whisper of an echo that I once dreamt
One more day to add to the tally, soon, so soon. through tired eyes, I look back,
Even now I know it's here, it's cold breath, running through,
My stomach tightens, I cant breath, the vice around my heart turns again,
In the end there is no pain, just the sorrow of what was, lost never to be again,
In the bleakness of the night hope took flight,
I count the days and I count the nights, wonder why,
Limited as it, maybe, seems an eternity to me,
Let the darkness in , let the lightness out, matters not to me, only the dead can see,
I scrape and claw, clasp and crawl, in the end destined to fall,
So warm that icy pit of omniscient nothingness I now adorn,
In the end we're all beloved
Copyright ©
Strebor
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2011-03-11 13:17:17]
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Re: Beloved
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by JohnnyFallen on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 01:26:57 PM AEST
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| That's how I feel often. God bless you for giving you a talent to write poetry. :) |
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Re: Beloved
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 04:57:34 PM AEST
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| this is very good i like it |
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Re: Beloved
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by emystar on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 10:00:37 PM AEST
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a magnificent write.
In the end we're all beloved.
Awesome.
blessings,
emy
Oh yeah, welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Beloved
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by karoody on
Saturday, 12th March 2011 @ 01:17:00 PM AEST
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I hope this isn't the last
Welcome to YPDC and best of luck to you
Kara |
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Re: Beloved
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by Frillycakes on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 09:13:39 AM AEST
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| You don't need my compliment to know that this is a good poem. |
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