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Betrayed
Contributed by
CherryReadPoet
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Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 05:14:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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You're killed through the eye,
Of which her best friend glares.
Pray to God you've looked your last.
You only have one wish to take it all back,
But instead you chose your whim.
You think you're cocky but you are blind.
Do you not see what you have?
It's been so long and you're gone,
How clueless can you get?
You know how to love what you lose,
Ane you never know what you've lost 'til it's gone.
You're mistake and you can't take it back.
What do you regret now?
Or if you regret at all.
No fairness will come for those who are weak,
Come to terms with yourself before you decide.
Do not turn a blind eye.
Have the courage of what you know you must do.
Your actions tell all,
So what is your choice?
Decipher what you want,
She'll be here in the wings.
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CherryReadPoet
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Re: Betrayed
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 05:54:24 PM AEST
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Really good writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Sjensen91 on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 09:56:58 PM AEST
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| very good! |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 12:02:03 AM AEST
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| Powerfull stuff, well done, i have enjoyd it |
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Re: Betrayed
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 06:03:52 AM AEST
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| You are very talented keep it up |
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