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A Man I Love
Contributed by
karoody
on
Friday, 25th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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brown eyes that melt my heart
a voice that soothes my soul
with a heart made of gold
a lesson in unconditional love
two feet can walk all the way
with a message-
"it's never too far"
this girl that's proud to say
the man was her loving father....
Copyright ©
karoody
... [
2003-04-25 00:05:00]
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Re: A Man I Love
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:01:28 AM AEST
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Kara a great, short, simple poem. Very surprising ending but I liked it.
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Re: A Man I Love
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:07:03 AM AEST
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| Brilliant piece.. so atlast you learned the art of mastering words.. expression in brief words is the indication of growth of poetic talent..blessings dear.. venkat |
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Re: A Man I Love
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 08:33:09 AM AEST
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short...sweet...a loving tribute
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Re: A Man I Love
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 26th April 2003 @ 03:21:08 PM AEST
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wow kara, just beautiful and well done! i really liked the ending...
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Re: A Man I Love
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:22:56 AM AEST
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| A wonderful tribute and powerful use of simple words. I like that. Well done! |
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Re: A Man I Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:03:33 PM AEST
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| kara this is so lovely, special hugs n' love to you n' your mom, nessa |
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Re: A Man I Love
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by exiled on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 03:43:04 PM AEST
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kara, this is really good. sammy likes. lol
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Re: A Man I Love
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by Apartment213 on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 04:27:37 PM AEST
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short and graceful i really enjoyed this poem
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Re: A Man I Love
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by wazarov on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 11:21:14 PM AEST
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| i envy a man who gets such love.. very beautiful from your heart my star. |
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Re: A Man I Love
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:00:52 PM AEST
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i think that all women must love their father first and their mother as well before they can really fall in love with another soul... because in loving their parents they understand why they love each other and created life... so i guess my rocky relationship with my parents will tell me something
-Sid |
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