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Tears in my eyes
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:37:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tears in my eyes
I have tears in my eyes as I want to go to the movies
I want to go bowling
I want to go roller skating
I want to go for a meal in a restaurant
I could do this alone
But “Billy no mates”, is not what I want to portray
I wish for a companion, today
I wish for a buddy
I need a crewmate
I need a wing man
My tears need mopping
My hands are sore
No one to help me carry my shopping
To many tears
Help! I’m drowning
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOKMxMjc8Mk&tracker=False
By banjosandwitch 10/03/11
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2011-03-10 07:37:10]
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Re: Tears in my eyes
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 08:19:18 AM AEST
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| This is so sad! It reminds me of being a teenager.. |
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Re: Tears in my eyes
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:46:35 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
I'm scarred of water but I'll throw you a life line.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Tears in my eyes
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 15th March 2011 @ 11:57:53 AM AEST
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This was not what I expected at all,
but I was pleasantly surprised.
Good write.
-Kara |
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