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Slack jawed
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:32:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Slack jawed
Its leaving me slack jawed
I can’t believe how sad I am
My choice of friend is on the decline
They never call, they never text
They are self centred
I need a new friend, I need help
Would you be so cruel?
Would you never call back?
Are you a wastrel?
New friends needed fast ASAP
I need a new BFF or two
Someone to hang with someone to drink with someone to laugh with
I need a new crew
This old one is done- through
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3CZYbIPCPo&tracker=False
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IctBSH5a9Sw&tracker=False
By banjosandwitch 10/03/11
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banjosandwitch
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2011-03-10 07:32:36]
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Re: Slack jawed
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th March 2011 @ 07:57:17 PM AEST
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Wow, I find a bit of humor in the last line.
Great job.
I don't drink and I can't hang but you are very interesting. I can be an online friend.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Slack jawed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 02:21:26 AM AEST
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| lol...funny. But, yeah, what Emy says. The real friends are difficult to find on-line. Cute poem though. Plus, often, dadly, people get wrapped up in their own lives and sort of forget about the rest of us....even the ones they say matter. :( |
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