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My Riches
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 11:26:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If i could write a poem
Makes you smile
If i could write a poem
Create little pictures in your mind
If i could write a poem
Makes you cry
If i could write a poem
Makes you forget about life for a while
If i could do all of that
I Would be the richest man
In the universe
It's the only Riches
I Ever wanted
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2011-03-08 23:26:55]
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Re: My Riches
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on
Wednesday, 9th March 2011 @ 04:14:25 AM AEST
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| player dis is gold dust 8) |
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Re: My Riches
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by Mando on
Wednesday, 9th March 2011 @ 09:22:48 AM AEST
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| good writing money isn't the only thing that makes us rich |
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Re: My Riches
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by katidid51 on
Tuesday, 29th March 2011 @ 10:01:58 AM AEST
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| Good but a bit confusing. I guess I am old school and want those connecting words. I feel the word "that" is missing so the poem for me does not flow. |
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