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to whom it may concern

Contributed by pat517 on Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 10:53:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Love is something that can't be wasted

Love is that sweetest thing i have tasted

I gave it my all and nothing less

with you, i felt truly blessed

we were pretty good you and I

now Im here alone in my room about to cry

"No man cries" people say

But there is nothing really else to do today

That which brought me joy is no longer

I can't see how this pain will make me stronger

it makes me think in what i believe in

now that im forever bleedin

did you really love me the way i did you?

or was it just a word with no meaning that you knew

I as there for you when u needed me

I was all i could be

its not how i envisioned it

with this pain to the point of imprisonment

i apologize for not making you happy

im sorry that this poem is sappy

but its what i feel and that is true

all i can say is i still love you

~Patrick S. Simental~
~ March 7, 2011~

Copyright © pat517 ... [ 2011-03-07 22:53:57]
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Re: to whom it may concern (User Rating: 1 )
by RachelSixx on Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 06:56:27 PM AEST
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beautifully written, you can really feel the emotion. great job.

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