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A cold wind whipping against you cheeks, the rosey color of your nose All you ha
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 07:10:09 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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A cold wind whipping against you cheeks, the rosey color of your nose
All you have to do is speak and I will save you from the storm.
So many stars in the sky, yet you came crashing overhead,
at what price are these tears when we can laugh and smile instead.
Guilty, dreadful, shameful me what have I become,
Ungrateful heart what have you done.
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Re: A cold wind whipping against you cheeks, the rosey color of your nose All you ha
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 08:21:07 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: A cold wind whipping against you cheeks, the rosey color of your nose All you ha
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 12:50:51 PM AEST
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"at what price are these tears when we can laugh and smile instead"
What a wonderful line. Often we worry and fret, especially in relationships, when we should really be enjoying ourselves and reliving good times, or creating new ones. Unfortunately I think the only person who can save someone from "the storm" is themselves. |
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