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Destiny
Contributed by
Flex4life13
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Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 06:59:41 PM in AEST
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He is destined for this, he feels it in his bones
Never will he stop until this feeling is owned
stark and sturdy he holds his ground, anyone comes near him he will knock them down.
The beauty of this world is the unkown, what is destined for us is yet to be shown.
He challenges the longest the darkest, the lonliest hour, just to prove to himself its he who holds the power.
Devotion fills his view, the broken smile yet remains shining through.
Never ever will a soul halt his march to the heaven he once knew
To the strongest falls the card that he once drew.
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2011-03-07 18:59:41]
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Re: Destiny
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 08:26:48 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Destiny
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 12:54:53 PM AEST
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| I love this piece. Very metaphorical, and very deep. You are an excellent writer. |
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Re: Destiny
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by Mando on
Tuesday, 8th March 2011 @ 05:57:00 PM AEST
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| Very good poem powerful |
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