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Whispered Wishes
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
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Whisper softly in my ear
what I so want to hear.
Words of love
whispered softly like wings of doves.
Carress my neck with gentle lips
and then move slowly against my hips.
Let me feel your heat of passion
as my body responds to all of your emotions.
Let's ride the rollercoaster of love
with every dip and every turns, soaring together high above.
Our bodies lock together in a lovers embrace.
Our hearts beat as one, fears, insecurities gone without a trace.
But do whisper in my ear
what I so want to hear.
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2003-04-24 19:35:00]
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:03:26 PM AEST
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| simply beautiful, "whispered softly like wings of doves" wow, lovely:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:35:38 PM AEST
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| beautiful and enticing!!!... blessings... |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 08:44:32 PM AEST
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passionate,, very good write
Shari |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by AngryPrincess on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 12:43:10 PM AEST
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very passionate, very good...i like this jackie...
Lindsey |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by fluffy on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 07:25:15 AM AEST
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i really like it! very beautiful!
xxxx |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by Chuckx on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:55:13 AM AEST
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very passionate, nice ride!
will my whisper
compensate
for the love
you obligate
yourself
in whispered lines
diluted
to a simple rhyme
I write bemus-ed? |
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Re: Whispered Wishes
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 30th May 2003 @ 07:02:43 AM AEST
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Passion with the one you adore
this and every time before
world where gentle raptures soar
gateway into so much more.
A joy to read |
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