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The Presence
Contributed by
sjensen91
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Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:44:23 PM in AEST
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I'm sitting here on this warm sunny day, The sky is beautiful the birds are chirping away.
I feel myself in a happy daze, I watch the trees and bushes sway.
I think to myself what could be more beautiful than this, then I saw my reflection and a presence insisted this.
Dont ever doubt what you have never tried, and always carry yourself with a ton of pride.
Your beautiful inside and out keep your strength and wash away the doubt.
As I listened my face felt so bare and I felt the touch of him through the wind going through my hair.
I got chills but I insisted to stay I felt the embrace of something that warm sunny day.
it grabbed my hand and put it to my heart, then it whispered this is where your happiness will start.
My mouth dropped in disbelief as I could feel everyone stare, then I looked behind me and no one was there.
I closed my eyes and my mood was fair, once again I felt it with the wind going through the hair.
As my eyes opened I sensed someone was again there, only to find it was a presence showing me it cared! By Steffanie M Jensen
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Re: The Presence
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:45:47 PM AEST
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Awesome writing and I know what u r talking about.
good work.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: The Presence
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by Dirkj on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 12:26:57 AM AEST
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| Love it , well done |
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Re: The Presence
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by hacktastic on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 01:17:47 AM AEST
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Nice! That is very uplifting. I would love for this to happen to everyone about once a year. I think a human flaw is the need for constant reminders in everything. But, that is the way we are. I hope the presence takes note.
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Re: The Presence
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by Mando on
Friday, 11th March 2011 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST
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| very well written this poem expressed alot of feelings |
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