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Exposure
Contributed by
rose03
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Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 09:50:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Exposure
I was exposed before you; my life was unfold
For you, I gave everything I had to give
Now you have left me here in the cold,
Stripped away my happiness and pride,
Into the dark I sit with nowhere to hide,
You have robbed me; you stole a piece of my heart,
You took it away with you, and torn it all apart.
Now I must recover the broken pieces,
I must find my way back to life-
A life without you by my side.
Copyright ©
rose03
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2011-03-06 21:50:20]
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Re: Exposure
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 10:00:48 PM AEST
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Sad but great job writing it.
Hang tuff you'll get thru.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Exposure
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by hacktastic on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 01:39:30 AM AEST
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Ouch. Hard stuff. Sorry you had to go through all of that.
My opinion, all works well in this one.
On the spelling, should "my life was unfold" be my life was unfolded" ? |
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Re: Exposure
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by Dirkj on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 01:49:54 AM AEST
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| Nice Work , enjoyd it |
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