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Coldfully Beautiful
Contributed by
exiled
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Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
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(Coldfully Beautiful)
raindrops falling
midnight mists are calling
blood flows from your eyes
as love is found between her thighs
you seal your lips with one final kiss
as everything dies.
burning desire
lay down your head to cry
my love, my hate
why can't I uncreate your face
coldfully beautiful.
screaming in the thundering skies
to take off these strings
take out her veins
wrap them around everything.
come a little bit closer
get back into my state of mind
the pain is not yet over
heaven cannot hear her cries
as everything dies.
walking against the winds
dancing amongst the rancid pedals
feeling the ghostly chills of life
tasting the wine of love between her thighs
coldfully beautiful
as death blooms and everything dies.
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2003-04-24 18:35:00]
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Re: Coldfully Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 07:40:40 PM AEST
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| this is great, vivid, if you don't mind me saying, i think the dedicated part is true here, but imho i think this poem is an excellent write of dark poetry:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Coldfully Beautiful
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by razorbladerose on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:37:53 AM AEST
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| Wow! What a beautiful write! Very inspiring for us dark poets out there! Excellent! |
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Re: Coldfully Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st May 2003 @ 05:41:25 PM AEST
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| sam hey i loved all your poems but if you don't call soon i'm going to beat you. where are you hiding at?call me soon so i can talk about boo. love the poems. |
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Re: Coldfully Beautiful
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by AngryPrincess on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 01:19:36 AM AEST
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again Sam, just amazingly writtenm i LOVE it :O)
Lindsey |
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Re: Coldfully Beautiful
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by SkYYBLu on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 06:35:52 PM AEST
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| I know of this feeling...this is so well written! It feels so cold to love and hate someone at the same time. I dunno. That is what this poem feels like to me. |
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