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Golden eyes

Contributed by alexeus on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 11:05:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You made me see the colours in the darkest night,
And then unlocked the chains that bided me so tight.
It burns inside to know you said I love you here tonight.
Because I know in all my life it will never feel this right.

I heard I love you a thousand times before.
But never did I dream that when it comes from you,
It would want to make me soar.

Where did you go? My heart cries out when you're not there.
My lungs collapse, I feel no life and suddenly I cannot breathe this air.
You stole my heart, and now you hold it in your hand.
I beg don't squeeze too hard, I know could not bear to stand.
For blood to drop from heavens to thy earth,
I'll drop to knees to rot inside, without rebirth.

The tears that roll from soft beloved cheek.
the soft gold eyes that gave my life a sudden kick.
You gave thy hope for oceans of despair.
Why does it make me cry to think of how much you really care?

You told of hurt that I will bring to you.
I scream at night to beg for it to not be true.
The chains that ripped thy flesh of life, and gave me such a fright.
My life is one dark room, and you're the candle in the night

Copyright © alexeus ... [ 2011-03-06 11:05:08]
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Re: Golden eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by eggflipper on Sunday, 6th March 2011 @ 06:23:22 PM AEST
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Interesting in its conflicting message. The internal struggles of love. the good the bad and the ugly all are present here. Well done

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